Blog post due by Thursday-- what do you think you need to do to revise your WC essay? 400 words due by midnight. You will have some time to work on this in class as well -- we will begin it on Tuesday during class

To revise my essay I will correct all the grammar mistakes I had throughout my paper. I’ll go to the writing lab to have a teacher to proofread it. I know that some of my paragraphs was unclear and need revising to make sure the reader knows what’s going on in the paper and not get confused. I’ll add to my literary analysis describe more in detail about the book,  characters, their live style, likes and dislikes. Most importantly add more to the setting of the story, give good background information. Tone and Mood is also important because if you don’t know what the characters are feeling how could you relate and understand where their coming from. All well written papers are entertaining. That meaning I’ll include more context to It making It more interesting so people won’t get bored while they are reading the paper. After I finish my rewriting my literary analysis I will continue to work on where I talk about the performance. Not only speak of my point of view of the project but my partner‘s points and see how they felt about the project seeing what they had found difficult what they liked what they dislike and compare it to myself while stating more stuff that we did while we were performing such as light, the way we set up our prop and what’s costumes we wore and why. How It portray the character because there was 3 boys including me in my group and in the play there 2 girls and 1 boy s we had to show that using costumes.